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Today’s Wild Card author is:
and the book:
A Dream Unfolding
(Prescott Pioneers 1)
CreateSpace (December 19, 2010)
***Special thanks to Karen Baney for sending me a review copy.***
ABOUT THE AUTHOR:
Karen Baney, in addition to writing Christian historical fiction and contemporary novels, works as a Software Engineer. Her faith plays an important role both in her life and in her writing. Karen and her husband make their home in Gilbert, Arizona, with their two dogs. She also holds a Masters of Business Administration from Arizona State University.
Visit the author’s website.
SHORT BOOK DESCRIPTION:
The promise of a new life and a chance to start overâŚ
Hannah Anderson had the life she always wanted, married to the man of her dreams. When her husbandâs brother gets in trouble with the law, the town turns against them, shattering her perfect life. Now they are left with only one choiceâto head west to the Arizona Territory in the hopes of creating a new life. Will the journey be worth the cost?
Will Colter, after burying his father, is forced to leave the ranch he has called home for nearly thirty years. The journey is dangerous, challenging him and his men. Will he find the new life he was hoping for?
Or, is there a new dream quietly unfolding before their eyes?
Product Details:
List Price: $14.99
Paperback: 352 pages
Publisher: CreateSpace (December 19, 2010)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1456512315
ISBN-13: 978-1456512316
ISLAND BREEZES
This story was really getting interesting until the third chapter when it abruptly turned into a story about some guy in Texas. What happened to the people in Ohio? Once I got past the reading of the will, it started to make sense, but it still would have been nice if there had been a transition into this chapter. Even a “meanwhile back at the ranch” would have worked for me.
After figuring out what was happening, it made it easier to switch back and forth between the two stories, because I was getting engrossed with them both. I really enjoyed it when the the two stories merged into the same story line. It was a good story with a bonus. I was able to add to my knowledge of the early Arizona territory.
I look forward to reading more about the Coulters in the next book of the Prescott Pioneers series.
I’m really looking forward to the next book
AND NOW…THE FIRST CHAPTER:
Cincinnati, Ohio
July 15, 1863
âGunshot wound!â
Hannah sighed at the tense sound of her husbandâs voice filtering down the hall from the parlor to the kitchen. Though she clearly heard the urgency in Drewâs tone, she took a moment to remove the half-baked biscuits from the heavy iron stove, lest they burn before she returned. This would be the third batch of baked goods she would toss this week so she could assist Drew in his surgery with one medical emergency or another.
Biting back a second frustrated sigh, she removed her cooking apron to don a fresh one. Tying the apron strings around her back, she entered the chaos of Drewâs surgery room. The heavy shuffling of feet echoed in the small room as four men grunted under the weight of the injured man. The acrid smell of blood hit Hannah full force. She recalled the days when the odor and sight of blood caused her stomach to roil. Nearly two years working by Drewâs side cured her of some of that sensitivity. Heart pounding rapidly, she prepared the ether cone, anticipating the forthcoming request.
âGet him on the table.â Drew instructed the men carrying the wounded bank manager, Mr. Davis, in a calm voice. As he turned to face her, his tone remained steady, âHannah, I need the ether now.â
Hannahâs breath caught in her throat as she looked into Mr. Davisâs panicked eyesâher earlier frustration vanished. Whispering words of comfort, she placed the cone over his nose and mouth, silently counting out the seconds. Around the third second, his thrashing stopped and his body relaxed into an unconscious state. She let out a shaky breath, relieved by the sight.
Drewâs lanky form bent over Mr. Davisâs left leg as he intently studied the blood soaked trousers. Hannah offered Drew scissors and he cut the pant leg to better see the wound. The bullet was lodged in Mr. Davisâs thigh. He placed a tourniquet above the gaping hole to stop the flow of blood. Hannah mopped up what she could with rags silently praying for their patient and for her husbandâs skill. As he requested the small forceps, she handed them over. Watching, she could not help but admire his steady hand and careful movements as he grasped the bullet with the forceps. Gently he removed the bullet.
As she administered another dose of ether, Drew threaded a needle with his long slender fingers, seemingly unaffected by the gravity of his task. He doused the wound to clean it before starting slow deliberate strokes with the needle to stitch the hole shut. When sweat beaded on his forehead, he barely noticed her swift action to dab it dry, his concentration so intense. Once he finished with the stitches, he wrapped the leg in bandages before checking for other signs of injury.
âI donât see any other wounds,â Drew said meeting her gaze as he washed the blood from his hands. His expression remained unreadable. âPlease sit with him for a minute while I speak with the men who brought him in.â
As Hannah pulled up a chair next to Mr. Davisâs still form, she caught most of the conversation playing out in the parlor, though slightly muffled from the distance.
âBank robbery,â one of the men replied in response to Drewâs query.
Gasps echoed in the small parlor that served as a waiting area for patients, followed by the hiss of rapid whispering. Hannah, knowing who was scheduled for appointments, imagined their shocked faces at the unexpected announcement.
âWill you let Mr. Davisâs wife know he is here and resting comfortably?â Drew requested.
The men replied affirmatively before the sound of their feet faded behind the closed front door.
âBank robbery,â Hannah muttered, surprised someone attempted such in the middle of the day in their peaceful town. She chided herself for thinking of Cincinnati as a town. With the large number of German immigrants arriving daily to work in the meat packing factories, her childhood home was quickly becoming a large city.
She checked Mr. Davisâs pulse again which returned to normal. The faint smell of ether hung in the air, intermingled with blood, causing her to take shallow breaths. Drew returned to the room with a deep frown on his face, obviously concerned with the news. As he listened to Mr. Davisâs breathing, Hannah went about cleaning and sanitizing the room and instruments, trying to hold her emotions at bay just a little longer.
As soon as she finished mopping up the trail of blood from the parlor to the surgery room, she jumped at the sound of the front door bursting open again.
âPhillip!â called out Mrs. Davis as she ran into the room. âOh, Phillip!â
The frail woman gasped at the sight of her pale husband sleeping. Hannah breathed a sigh of relief that she completed the cleaning before Mrs. Davis arrived, fearful for the womanâs constitution. Glancing down at her blood splattered apron, she hoped to go unnoticed, certain the sight would send Mrs. Davis into a fit of apoplexy.
âMrs. Davis,â Drew said, speaking in calm soft tones as he clapped his hand over the older womanâs, âhe will be just fine. He is resting now, but should be awake later this evening. I would like to keep him here for a few days to make sure he is doing well, and then Iâll send him home to your capable care.â
âThank you, Dr. Anderson,â Mrs. Davis replied, blotting her tears with a handkerchief before taking a seat next to her husband.
Quietly exiting the room, Hannah paused inside the doorway of the kitchen. The intensity of the preceding hours drained her energy as the emotions rushed forward. Leaning her head back against the wall, she let the tears roll down her face. Please let the image of Mr. Davisâs fear-stricken face fade from my mind quickly. The look had been so intense that she felt his fear as if it were her ownânot in the moment she looked at him, but now as she returned to the calmness of her kitchen.
Wiping the tears from her face with the back of her hand, she removed the stained apron and threw it into a bucket to soak. Picking up a clean apron, she returned to the now half crunchy half soggy biscuits next to the oven trying to push the morning from her mind. Knowing there was no way to salvage the biscuits; she threw them into the waste and started on a fresh batch.
Carefully, she measured out the flour and buttermilk. The familiar actions of baking soothed her edgy nerves. Using the technique her aunt taught her, Hannah rolled out the biscuit dough and cut round forms, repeating the steps until all the dough formed raw biscuits. Numbly she continued through the motions until lovely golden brown biscuits emerged from the oven.
As Drew saw his last scheduled patient for the day, Hannah started her afternoon routine of tidying the clinic. Starting in the parlor at the front of the house, she straightened chairs and dusted the furniture. From the parlor, she turned left into Drewâs office since both surgery rooms on the right were occupied, one by Mr. Davis and the other by Drew and his patient. Hannah dusted her husbandâs desk and stowed the patient charts in the largest drawer at the bottom of the oak desk. Taking a seat, Hannah flipped through the stack of bills. There never seemed to be enough time to see to everything. She needed to spend some time updating the ledgers soon.
Hannah stood listening as Drew escorted the last patient to the parlor. She entered the now vacant surgery room, wiping down all the surfaces. Once the room was cleaned, Hannah checked on Mr. Davis again. He was still resting peacefully, his wife clutching his hand as she sat in the chair, her chin resting against her chest either in prayer or in sleep.
Walking down the hall to the kitchen at the back of the house, Hannah began supper preparations. She felt most at peace in her kitchenâher domain. Perhaps it was from the few years she spent by her loving auntâs side learning how to bake and cook, those domestic skills her mother had not instilled before her passing.
Shaking off the mounting melancholy, she shifted her thoughts back to Mr. Davisâs care. Following the meal, she would send Drew upstairs to their bedroom to get some rest. She would take the first shift watching Mr. Davis and then, sometime in the middle of the night she would wake Drew to take over.
At times like these, she wished Drew would hire a nurse. Hannah barely kept up with the laundry, cleaning, and meal preparations without overnight patients. Whenever a patient required round the clock care, she fell woefully behind in other chores. What would she do when she had children to care for?
âBarnes,â Drew greeted, with some hesitation, as one of the cityâs policemen entered the clinic alone. Being one of two doctors in town, Drew often patched up robbers or drunken brawlers before Barnes hauled them off to jail. Occasionally he even visited the jail when Barnes deemed it too dangerous to bring the criminal to the clinic.
âWhat brings you here?â Drew asked, still unable to shake his concern that Barnes accompanied no one.
Barnes, his voice low and serious, asked, âMay I have a word with you and Mrs. Anderson?â
Drew showed him to his office where their conversation could remain private. Once the bulky man took a seat, Drew quickly fetched Hannah. The lack of sleep from the night before did not help his increasing nervousness about the policemanâs unusual behavior.
As Hannah took a seat, Barnes started, âWe have your brother, Thomas, in custody down at the jailhouse. He was identified as one of the men in yesterdayâs failed attempt to rob the bank.â
Drew felt his throat constrict and his heart started beating rapidly, distressed over his brotherâs increasingly wild behavior.
Sinking into the remaining chair, he asked tensely, âWhat happened?â
âFrom what we pieced together,â Barnesâ deep voice added to his air of authority, âit looks like Thomas, along with Sam Rogers and Ed Rogers, stormed the bank yesterday afternoon as one of the patrons was leaving. They pulled their guns on Mr. Davis and forced him to open the safe in the back room. Mr. Davis kept a loaded revolver in the safe, so once he opened it, he turned the gun on Sam and shot him in the foot. Then Ed fired on Mr. Davis.â
Still stunned, Drew merely nodded. He did not want to believe his brother was party to this crazy affair, crossing the line from rebellion to crime.
âAfter Mr. Davis was shot,â Barnes continued, âall three men took off, leaving the money behind. A few pedestrians noted the direction. We followed the trail and it led us to the Rogersâ house. We arrested all three men. Like I said, they are in jail and will remain there until a judge decides what is to be done.â
Drew looked over at Hannah. Her eyes widened with concern. Thomas rebelled for years, though never so boldly. Disappointment washed over Drew, quickly follow by guilt. If only he had been able to get through to Thomas. Maybe this would not have happened.
Ever since their father died, Drewâs brother could not contain his restless spirit. Thomas started hanging out with the Rogers brothers and things went downhill from there. The Rogers brothers bullied classmates during their school days and as they aged, they got worse: petty theft from the mercantile, vandalizing businesses, and picking fights with anyone who would pay them mind. When Thomas started staying out late and carousing with Sam and Ed Rogers, Drew did not hesitate to warn Thomas of the dangers of his actions. Closing his eyes, Drew clearly remembered the day he confronted his brother.
—
Drew woke to a thudding sound on the stairs. Sitting upright, he remained completely still, trying to determine if what he heard was real or imagined as his heart pounded against his chest. Thud. There is it was again.
Slipping from the bed, Drew carefully crept to the closed bedroom door. Slowly he cracked it open, just as a muffled curse reached his ears. Thomas!
Stepping from the room, Drew pulled the bedroom door closed behind him, so as not to wake Hannah. At the top of the stairs he made out Thomasâs limp form lying prostrate across several of the stairs. The stale cigar smoke and sickening sweet smell of whiskey clung to his brotherâs clothing. As Drew approached, Thomas looked up and cursed again.
At first, Drew thought Thomas was merely drunk againâa frequent occurrence. But when he tried to help him up, Thomas recoiled and moaned in pain. Drew led him down the stairs and into the surgery room for a quick examination. Lighting the oil lamp, Drew saw the extent of his brotherâs injuries. Besides the swollen black eye, his face and knuckles were covered with numerous cuts and scrapes. His ribs were also bruised. This must have been his worst fight to date.
âYou must stop this Thomas,â he warned his brother, keeping his voice low. âThe drinking, the gamblingâit is only going to lead to trouble.â
âWhat do you care?â Thomas roared.
He grew weary of the familiar accusation. Thomas always thought Drew did not careâDrew always tried to show his concern. He was letting him live here. Wasnât that proof enough that he cared? As his anger rose, so did his voice. âLook at yourself. Night after night you come home drunk orââ
âYou have no right to lecture me! Iâm old enough to take care of myself and do as I please. Mind your own business!â
âIt is my business, as long as you are living in this house!â Drew volleyed back. Taking his brother in had been a mistake. He thought providing a home and some structure would help Thomas give up his wild ways. Instead, no matter what Drew did, Thomas threw it in his face.
âDonât act like you are doing me a favor, Drew,â the hatred poured from his brotherâs lips. âI know what you are doing. You just donât want to feel guilty for leaving me here while you went to medical school. But you should! Living with Uncle Peter was awful!â
âUncle Peter did his best to help you grow up with some discipline,â Drew countered.
âDonât defend that selfish old man!â
The argument escalated until Hannah appeared in the doorway. When she looked from Drew to Thomas and back again, Drew shut his mouth mid-sentence. Thomas frowned, cursed, then turned and stormed out into the night.
He never saw his brother again, except once in passing on the street.
—
Hannahâs dainty cough brought Drewâs attention back to the discussion with Barnes.
âDr. Anderson,â Barnes continued as he stood and walked to the front door, âI suggest you consider getting legal representation for your brother.â
Closing the door behind Barnes, Drew snorted. He refused to bail Thomas out of trouble again. Aware of the waiting patients, Drew ushered Hannah back to his office and closed the door, wondering just how much they overheard.
âWhat are you going to do?â Hannah asked, her anxiety evident.
âWhat can I do?â Drew replied, acknowledging his own helplessness in this situation. âHe is a grown man and he is not my responsibility any longer.â
âWill you get an attorney as Mr. Barnes suggested?â she asked, her voice full of compassion.
âNo,â he answered angrily. Seeing the shock on Hannahâs face, he quickly explained, âAt some point Thomas must choose his own way. WellâŚhe already has. He made that clear more than a year ago. There is nothing I can do or say that will change anything.â
Drew ran his fingers through his hair in frustration. His heart broke again as he thought of how disappointed his father would be. Perhaps his father passing on was a good thing. At least he would not witness his youngest sonâs destructive behavior.
Sunday morning, Hannah put the finishing touches on the roast and slid it into the oven. Bounding up the stairs she quickly untied the apron from her waist. Standing before the mirror she brushed out her long strawberry blonde hair then twisted it into a chignon at the base of her neck inside the decorative black netted hair piece. She smiled, pleased with her appearance.
âYou look lovely,â Drew commented as his pale blue eyes surveyed the light blue calico dress before resting on her eyes. Color flushed her face with the intensity of his appraisal.
âCome here,â he added, pulling her close. âYour eyes look bluer than the sky in that dress.â He brushed lips lightly across hers in a brief kiss.
Releasing her, he asked, âLooking forward to Emilyâs visit?â
âI can hardly wait,â Hannah answered giddily.
As Hannah preceded Drew down the stairs, she could not contain her excitement over the planned Sunday dinner guestsâLevi and Emily Werner. It had been two months since Hannah had seen Emily. Earlier this week, Levi stopped by the clinic to let Hannah know Emily would be back to church this week, having sufficiently recovered from her morning sickness. Hannah quickly extended an invitation for dinner, missing her best friend dearly.
Emily and Hannah grew up on adjoining farms several miles outside of Cincinnati. Hannah could not remember a time when she and Emily werenât friends, despite being such opposites in looks and personality. With her dark curls and flashing nutmeg brown eyes, Emily charmed everyone, from the most reserved students to the toughest bullies in their school. As she grew older and began filling out her dress, boys noticed her long before noticing Hannahânot that any had noticed Hannah in school. Walking to and from school together, Hannah often found herself in the role of quiet listener to Emilyâs constant chattering about what Amanda Taylor wore that day, or how the pigs on the farm gave birth to a large litter, or who danced with who at the last barn dance. Perhaps if Emily had set her mind on memorizing her lessons at school and not on such things, she would have made higher marks and Hannah would have spent less time trying to help her catch up.
Besides helping Emily with her school work, Hannah found in her a friend with whom she could confide her deepest sorrows, especially following her motherâs death. Even when her father sent her away to live with her aunt, she wrote letters to Emily almost weekly. When Hannah moved back to the farm with her father, years later, she easily picked up her friendship with Emily. Sadly, she was the only constant person in her life.
As Drew pulled the phaeton carriage to a stop down the street from the large whitewashed church building, Hannah scanned the crowd for her tall friend. Spotting her, she threw her arm up for a quick wave after Drew helped her to the ground. Emily turned without acknowledging Hannah and entered through the large dark wood doors. Perhaps she just didnât see me.
Placing her hand in the crook of Drewâs arm, Hannah smiled, confident nothing could ruin her good mood in anticipation of a wonderful afternoon.
Once inside the church, Hannah watched as Emily and Levi took their seats in their normal pew. Drew led Hannah to the same pew. As soon as Drew and Hannah sat, she leaned forward to greet Emily, who immediately, without word, stood and followed her husband out of the pew.
âEmily, waitââ
âWeâll talk later,â Emily hissed, glancing back over her shoulder with a frown.
When Levi and Emily took a seat on the other side of the sanctuary, Hannah couldnât help but feel hurt by her friendâs angry response. Had she unknowingly done something to offend Emily?
Feeling Drewâs body stiffen, Hannah peeked his direction. The couple on the other side of Drew stood and moved elsewhere. Soon, the pew in front of them emptied, as long time friends scattered to the edges of the room like marbles spilled on the floor.
Looking up at Drew she saw the stoic expression etched on his face.
âWhatâs going on?â she whispered, still trying to determine in what way she or Drew might have offended so many people.
Drew shook his head curtly.
When the music started, she shifted her gaze to the words in the hymnal, not needing to read them, but needing to hide her growing sadness over the rejection of her friends. Her voice sounded forced as she tried to sing praises to her God. Inside, she felt anything but gratitude.
Hannah shifted in her seat as the service dragged on. Her attention waned, not really hearing the words of the pastor.
As the last strains of the final hymn echoed in the wooden room, the pastor stood and gave a blessing. The sound of booted feet heightened as the crowd exited the church. Not waiting for Drew, Hannah hurried to catch up with Emily outside.
âEmily, weâve been sitting together for years. Why did you move this morning?â Hannah asked as her friend tried to dodge her for a second time. âArenât you coming to dinner?â
âNo, we are not,â Emily replied emphasizing each word, not looking Hannah in the eye.
âAre you not feeling well?â
âI am feeling fine,â Emily said, glaring at Drew as he came to stand next to his wife.
Hannah held her breath, hoping Emily might elaborate on her strange behavior.
âIf youâll excuse us,â Emily snapped as Levi started leading her around Hannah again.
Confused and hurt by Emilyâs behavior, she reached out, placing her hand on Emilyâs arm. âPlease tell me, what have I done that offends you?â
Emilyâs dark eyes flashed with anger as she turned to face Hannah. Brushing Hannahâs hand from her arm, she said, âIt was our money, Hannah. We sacrificed and saved for years for that money. Levi took on that second shift at the meat factory so we would have enough for a home of our own to get out of that horrible squalor.â
âI donât understandââ
âNo, you donât understand. And neither did Thomas. He just thought he could walk right into that bank and take what we worked so hard for,â Emily wagged her finger in Hannahâs face, causing Hannah to involuntarily take a step backwards. âAnd him, a worthless, gambling scoundrel! Never worked an honest dayâs labor in his life. But, he thought he could just take what wasnât his.â
âI understand your anger with Thomas, butââ
Levi, who stood with arms folded across his barrel chest, finally spoke, directing his comments to Drew, âA doctor is nothing without his reputation and yours is tainted by your brotherâs wild ways. Tell me, Drew, did he try to hide out at your clinic when his plan failed?â Anger shrouded his words.
Drew dropped his arms to his side, stepping closer to Levi. âHow could you think such a thing?â
Hannah bit her lower lip, hoping Drew and Levi would not come to blows. She was certain Drew would not win against the much larger man.
âEveryone knows youâve been bailing him out of trouble for years. Well, this time the people of this city are not going to stand for it,â Levi responded through clenched teeth.
By now, several other couples gathered around listening to the heated conversation. Friends, who greeted her with a hug and warm smile last week, looked on with hatred carved on their faces. Tears threatened at the corners of Hannahâs eyes as the pain of betrayal heightened.
âThere is nothing to get upset about,â Drew pleaded, looking around the crowd. âI have not seen Thomas in over a year.â
âThatâs not what Mrs. Pierce said!â one woman from the crowd shouted. âShe said she saw a man who looked like your brother going into the clinic late that night.â
Hannah frowned, balling her fist at her side. How can they believe that busybody over my husband?
âIf anyone did enter the clinic that night,â Drewâs voice boomed, âit was without an invitation.â
âSo you donât deny what Mrs. Pierce said?â Levi pulled Drewâs attention his way.
Running his hand through his short sandy hair, Drew said, âIâm saying that it is possible someone could have entered uninvited without our knowledge.â
Emily raised her voice above the growing murmurs, âIt doesnât matter to me if Thomas entered your house with your blessing or not. I for one,â she said, resting her hand on her protruding belly, âwill not be birthing my child at your clinic or with your assistance.â
Hannahâs tears streamed down her heated face as Emilyâs words pierced her heart. How could Emily say such a thing? She talked for months about how wonderful it would be to have her best friend by her side as she labored to bring her first child into this world. Now, the friend who stood by her in a school yard full of bullies was acting the part of instigator. Did their friendship mean so little?
âAnd I wonât be stopping at your clinic for Franklinâs medications!â another older married woman shouted.
âWhen my niece has her child, Iâm telling her to go to Doc Henderson!â A typically quiet man shouted.
As others added in vehement voices their promise to no longer visit Drewâs clinic, Hannah watched his face harden. Closing his eyes, he bowed his head.
Donât give up, Drew! Her heart shouted.
When he lifted his head again, he held out his elbow for Hannah wordlessly. With a firm nod to her, she read the silent message: it was time to go. In the midst of angry murmurs circling about them, Hannah followed her husband to their carriage. As he took the seat next to her, his eyes faced forward. His jaw set in a hard line. His shoulders slumped in defeat.